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Thursday, July 26, 2007

55Flash Fiction Friday

She gently takes hold of me with both hands.

Slowly she places me into her mouth and

her tongue feels oh so good.

She has the most gentle touch.

It is obvious how into this she is.

The others are so jealous how good she is.


All the clarinetists so want to be first chair.












In honor of the summer time it just felt right to tie it into band camp and why not do that by picking on the liquorish stick aka clarinet. My sister used to play clarinet and was often first chair. She was pretty good despite having braces. I managed to do so so with it but I did not know all the fingerings and boy did I like to squeak the high notes. Maybe I just did not have the reed wet enough. Maybe I was just destined to be 159th chair if I ever tried out.

This has been a 55Flash Fiction Friday. If you would like to join the group of people and give this a try we would love to have you. We promise not to count how many words or criticize. If you do decide to give it a try, just post it up on Friday and let Suzie (G-Man for this week) know that you played by leaving a comment on their blog so everyone can come and visit.

If you want to know more about doing one of these you can click on the link on my side bar or feel free to ask about it. It is not all that bad once you give it a try and it gets even easier.

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20 Comments:
Blogger snowelf said...

Bryan, this 55 is so awesome.
Holy cow.

--snow

July 27, 2007 12:10 AM  
Blogger Cha Cha said...

Wow, Barman.

Did I say wow?

I used to be first chair clarinet.

Until I started playing the e-flat.

Cos then I was the only chair.

And, yeah, I went to band camp.

It wasn't all it's cracked-up to be.

But, there was a day when Strumpet rarely was not suckin' on her reed.

Nowadays I've just found other ways to satiate my oral fixation.

VERY nice 55, Bryan.

A fucking plus.

July 27, 2007 12:14 AM  
Blogger barman said...

I had a silly idea and thought I would see how it went. I like the patented G-Man twist at the end. Thank you Snow.

July 27, 2007 12:15 AM  
Blogger barman said...

You know I thought you might enjoy that Strumpet but I had not idea about you being first chair. It is almost like I wrote it for you. Hummm....

July 27, 2007 12:17 AM  
Blogger Little Wing said...

Oh My!
For a moment I thought you were into sensual poetry!
I thought, wow, this is a side of you I didn't know about!
I write sensual poetry, so that is where my mind was!
A great work of art Bryan!
Bravo!
Oh and your sister was a cutie pie!

July 27, 2007 12:21 AM  
Blogger G-Man said...

You've learned well grasshopper......
The G-Man whole heartedly approves!!!
Great Job Bryan.....G

July 27, 2007 12:38 AM  
Blogger barman said...

Little Wing, I am afraid I would not be very good at sensuous poetry but maybe I should give it a try and see. After all no one has to see it and I do have a trusty shredder! The person in the picture was something I found to support the 55 although my Sister was not bad looking either, so I heard. Thank you very much.

G-Man, thank you my master.

July 27, 2007 12:46 AM  
Blogger SignGurl said...

You had me going there for a minute. Great twist! I was also first chair clarinet with braces.

July 27, 2007 8:09 AM  
Blogger Melodie Norman Haas said...

That was a great Flash 55! I like your double entendre there :) Even if you didn't mean it LOL

July 27, 2007 10:22 AM  
Blogger Snow White said...

Great job! I love a good story with a twist. Happy Friday!

July 27, 2007 11:17 AM  
Blogger Crabby said...

Holy crow! I thought I was gonna need a cigarette for a minute there. LOL! Nice, 55 bry. Very nice. You guys are all getting good at this!

July 27, 2007 12:07 PM  
Blogger barman said...

Boy Sign, that is amazing. That is two people that I visit that have said that. Who knew? I would think that would make you extra proud of #1. We had hoped my niece would take up an intrument but no dice. No band geak for her.

Ameratis, oh I was shooting for that being careful how things were said that that it would lead you in one direction but, once you read it again, it could still apply the other direction. It was kinda a fun...

Snow, G-Man seems to be so good at the twist that I have been trying to imitate him. He is a good inspiration.

Crabbs, I think I have a candy cigarette somewhere... let me pass it along. It was kind scary for a moment there.

July 27, 2007 1:30 PM  
Blogger Flash said...

Damn you!1! I totally fell for that...

get me all worked up......

band geeks. you guys are the worst sexual deviants out there.

July 27, 2007 4:07 PM  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

Ahh you little tease! LOL

July 27, 2007 4:26 PM  
Blogger Cha Cha said...

Well, Bryan...let's put it this way.

Maybe you shouldn't start-up with the sensual poetry stuff if you're not comfortable in that particular genre...

...but you could definitely write stories about blow jobs!

We all have to start somewhere.

=P

P.S. I wore braces too. For two fucking years.

And it was worth every fucking second they were on.

July 27, 2007 5:18 PM  
Blogger BTExpress said...

Good job! You had me hooked from the start. Of course my imagination went right to the gutter, so the ending wasn't what I'd expected.

July 27, 2007 5:52 PM  
Blogger John C. Goacher said...

I don't get it. Am I missing something? Is it me?

Bryan would know.

July 27, 2007 10:27 PM  
Blogger GAB said...

WTG once again Bryan. OBTW I love the pic of the dog on top Part of your family?

July 28, 2007 12:20 AM  
Blogger lime said...

well done!!!! that was terrific bryan. i knew there had to bea twist but i wasn't sure what it was until the end. hehehehe

July 28, 2007 12:36 PM  
Blogger Mona said...

Wonderfully Done 55 LOL!!!
I like the Galenian twist in the end!

You Rock!

July 30, 2007 8:16 AM  

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