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Friday, August 10, 2007

55Flash Fiction Friday

You knew it was a stupid thing to do
but desperate times call for desperate measures.
Now you’re sitting in the back of a squad car.

You thought who would blame you
for trying to rob the meter maid.
No one likes the meter maid.
No one except for Detective Archer
who just arrested you.


If you would like to give a 55Flash Fiction Friday then please do. Basically they are 55 words in length but do not worry if you are close but not right on. Also this is suppose to be fiction but the Flash 55 police will not give you to hard of time if this is not fiction. Anyway in the 55 words put together a mini story with a plot and at least one character and have a fun time. Then when you have posted your 55Flash, go tell Susie so that others know you are up and they can visit. Oh and the most important thing, have a fun time doing it.

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16 Comments:
Blogger Mona said...

Barman...Hahaha.. yes how they all love to catch a thief! They WANT Robbers dont they? how would they survive without them!

Btwn.. I played too!

August 10, 2007 10:24 AM  
Blogger Unknown said...

Great Flash 55! You arrested my attention immediately!

~smiles~

my first one is up!

August 10, 2007 12:25 PM  
Blogger Just Jan said...

you say it's fiction, but is it really????

August 10, 2007 1:04 PM  
Blogger Just Jan said...

you say it's fiction, but is it really????

August 10, 2007 1:04 PM  
Blogger S said...

Oooh Dectective Archer and the Meter Maid, huh? Now we know!

Excellently done, my dear. Thanks for playing, Bryan.

August 10, 2007 1:18 PM  
Blogger Flash said...

Damn it, I was hoping no one would read that about me in the paper....

all those quarters...gone.....

And of couse, I played

August 10, 2007 5:06 PM  
Blogger SignGurl said...

You know, it's illegal to put money into someone else's meter? I almost got arrested for it.

August 10, 2007 5:08 PM  
Blogger Sophia said...

That's really good! What is the charge for putting money in someone else's meter????? My very first flash 55 is up.

August 10, 2007 5:18 PM  
Blogger G-Man said...

Barman....
You need to borrow a few bucks?
Hehehehe...
Great Job Bryan,
I'm glad Susie is doing her job!!

August 10, 2007 7:39 PM  
Blogger morgetron said...

Lovely Rita Meter Maid.

Hey Barman!

Nice 55.

-J

August 10, 2007 8:00 PM  
Blogger snowelf said...

Bryan, sorry, finally getting over here! This was a great one--I love the implication at the end! Excellent!

Have a wonderful weekend!

--snow

August 12, 2007 3:18 PM  
Blogger lime said...

hehehe, if you're from my town the detectives steal the quarters out of the meters.....

August 12, 2007 4:19 PM  
Blogger Head Cookie said...

Great 55 please check out my mute monday

August 12, 2007 8:14 PM  
Blogger barman said...

You guys are being so clever in your comments. You got me a chuckling for sure.

Ambre and Sophia I visited and your first 55s look wonderful. I hope you play next week again. That would be so great.

Mona, I know, if everyone was honest we would not need so many police or meeter maids. I shall have to come visit. Sorry been distracted lately.

Jan, yep it is fiction. I have only been in a police car twice when I was in trouble. Once when I was caught writing in wet cement and once when I shoplifted. By the way, that last one I am not to proud of. So no, this was not me.

S, glad you made it. I so had no creative juices flowing this week. I have no idea where this came from.

Oh Flash, that was you? Too bad, I would love to have all those quarters. you could play games forever. Oh dear, I have been busy. I best go check out your 55. Better late then never.

Sign I would so get in trouble then. If someone I know was going to get a ticket I would feed the meeter first. Hopefully I never find out the penalty.

G, a few bucks would be nice... Oh wait, I cleaned out the couch. I think I am set.

J, now you have that song stuck in my head. That was so perfect however.

Thank you Snow. I did not do a lot other than plan over the weekend but that is OK.

Lime, too funny. I just might need to visit some time. I have this urge to go to Punxsutawney sometime. Yea, I am weird that way.

Jadey, I just did. I knew there was a reason I did not do drugs. Yuck.

August 13, 2007 12:18 AM  
Blogger morgetron said...

Song planting is a specialty of mine, though I do often fall victim to my own tricks.

Hehehehe.

-J

August 13, 2007 1:42 AM  
Blogger jungle jane said...

Maybe he/she broke the speed limit and didn't have any registration papers, hahahahahahaha!

August 15, 2007 3:20 PM  

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